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Not another Ben's novel. I'm seeing twice my country's artist's novel cover now...
Anyway, I'm gonna fav it. Going to my archives. XP

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Hmm...I'm not sure if I'm appropriate to say this, but I'll just comment. And be warned, it's long.

What you did to the bg is not really a good combination to the scan. In fact, it's just doesn't blends. You use splatter and rain-like, combine it together seems really odd. If you look carefully, splatters have many kinds of patterns. Most of it is flat face-like splatters. For this wall, it doesn't goes well with flat face-like splatters. And I won't suggest you to use splatters as well. In the opposite way, I'd rather go with the rain-like. But frankly speaking, I like the (stock images?). Matches well.

As for the scan, nice that you've used your own scan. But it doesn't mean you can just simply cut and paste it, and it's done, just like that. You've gotta clean up the scan first. Firstly, the light on the scan's head stands out too much. And it doesn't blends in the bg. Try select the light and use variation, light to dark. If it doesn't work, then you've gotta try other selections. To make the scan more lively/ fresh, again I suggest you use variation, then use hue & saturation. It works out fine with me, but I'm not sure about your side, though. The rest of the sides are all okay. Just work on the lighting effect.

Lastly, work on the fonts. Try using other fonts, and try not to use emboss.

Again, I hope I'm not being offensive or something. Just thought you might want some help to be a good waller. I hope this helps you. :)

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Ahahaa...I'm not a guy, so I can't judge. ^_^' But by instincts, of course woman satisfies the man.

Love the wall, especially the bg textures. Nicely done with the lights.
Man, I like the fonts you choose! XD Ahem, anyway, nice work. :)

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Let's see...high quality scan? I hope so. Cus it's damn nice! XD And also the colours're not fading nor it's dotted. :)

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OMG! It's pretty! XD
Love how you did the bg; the water and grass that's on the water, so are the clouds. Very artistic to use the "STOP" sign. Luckily you did the cleaning. Cus it'll look weird when you have the realistic "STOP" sign on the bg if you haven't clean it.
Great work!

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You add too much birds on the bg. But pink fits the scan well, adding mists on the bg and around her. But I do suggest you make the scan to have shadow.
Again, stop with the emboss effect for the text. It's killing the wall...
Miyuki-chan, Id rather die than having me to teach you how to make a good wall... x_x
8/10 for this wall.
Ganbatte ne! ;)

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Ah, yes, agree with Wapy. You don't need to use emboss effect. It seems too weird to have stars being embossed.
The scan's definitely too bright. If only you hadn't extract the scan to brightness, and use the original one, it should be okay. Then add a little shadow onto it. It'll be nice that way.
Quite okay for the bg. Somehow attracting too much attention to it.
The font, as I've said it long time ago...Please do not emboss and add shadow to it. It's destroying the wallpaper. (I'm very sorry to say that, Miyuki-chan! But it's true! >_< )
The mists can be fix if you just make it slightly colourful, example light pink to suit the scan.
Overall, it's 7.25/10.
Hope you can do it better. ;)

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Ah, simple wall. Love the bg. Ah, so this is your first wall you made. Not bad. I hope the botchii's not gonna delete this.

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Miyuki-chan...what did you do to the bg?...It looks as though you've just add lotsa junks on the bg.
Sigh...okay...if you wanna make it nice, remove all the things on the bg. Lemme give you an idea. You can do a fantasy world (patch of clouds) wall with the scan in the middle.
The bottom right, remove the clock brush. It won't work with the poem.
If you need me, call me...though right now I'm outta credit...

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You should blur the scan a little. It looks jagged.
Bg looks okay.
...What am I gonna say? Practice more. ^^

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The scan need more cleaning. The side lines (black lines) can be seen. I prefer to say it's a simple wall. Am I wrong? ^^"
Remove the emboss at the back of the words and the glowing effect from the font.

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The bg're okay, only that the moon's kinda simple. It's big...doesn't fit...Why don't you try adding more moons above? Like for example my Byakuya wall. It'll look fantastic.
You should remove the butterfly. It looks weird and it's blocking the view (the scan).
Try not to emboss the fonts.
Miyuki-chan, you did great. Ganbatte ne! ^^

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Nicely done. You use the scan to recreate the effects. Even the shield itself.
Simple bg with simple effects.
Nice work.

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Huh? Went missing? Ah...it's in quarantaine. Means it'll be deleted after April 23 (checked your other walls). It's probably you've done simple walls. Example, cut the scan out, and paste in some bgs. Just like that, didnt done any effects or somewhat, just cut and paste.

Coming back to your wall, the scan look awkward to be fit with the bg. And yet, the bg seems too real. And it's also simple.
The scan's abit blurry though...

I suggest you try out with some brushes. It seems difficult at first, but after a while you'll get used to it.

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Gah! *jaw drop* *doops*
Spectecular? Hmm...I would say yes.
Stairs? To me, looks more like the rooftop... ^_^'
Anyway, a great idea for the bg. Yup, definately looks heaven. :)
Maybe make the buildings to be the original state, which is the perfect view, with no blurring effect. But maybe that's just me.
Agree with what Asahi had mentioned, the scan could do more of a coloring besides yellow.
Overall, an awesome wall. :)

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Cool bg. Fits well with my desktop. XP
Rider looks cool with the outfit she's wearing besides wearing her battle suit.
Great work. +Fav here. :)

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Lol. You can edit the description on the left panel. :D That way you don't have to write again over here. :)
Like the bg. But seems weird though. But maybe that's just me.
Like the way you did the grass.
The birds kinda solid. I'd rather think you don't add birds. Feels funny though...

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Nice wall. Love the buildings. Yeah, and the bg too.
No textures...Good thing you didn't put anywhere but on the wall that somehow probably couldn't be seen. But, I really like the way you did the textures. It's like been carved into the wall.
Great work. :)

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The bg looks great. Especially the front view.
Definately fits well with Saber.
Great work. +Fav :)

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Nicely done for Kuchiki Byakuya.
Though I don't really know the bg has its meaning. But a really nice bg too.
Great work.

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Gosh, it makes me laugh to see there's some things that everybody here mentioned the same thing. :D
Yeah, agree...the text look small. Whereas the soldiers probably shouldn't be there.
But thinking again Saber is there, the bg looks good on her and it fits well.
Perhaps you shouldn't add text since you said you just want to focus on what's on the wall or the wall itself.
Overall, a great work you did. :)

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Cool cg mecha. Like how you did those lasers beam.
Nice space bg. But adding the lights seems in odd position.
It's like the direction comes from the left side.
I suggest you add the lights of the direction from the center in which your main objective is the mecha. Then it'll look better and stunning.

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Hmm...what can I say...it's a cool wall. Well, okay, a beautiful wall. ^_^'
Really like the leaves falling down.
Cool sky too.
Nice attraction. Fits well with the scan.
Great work.

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Love the bg. It has nice surroundings.
But the halo kinda off abit. Weird possition though.
Like the effects which I think it's from the sky.
Good job.

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